Know whats funny?
My current lover (who's for obvious reasons the inspiration for this, at least in part) is also a poet, and so I showed zir this before it was quite finished.
And may I tell you ze is rather lovely? Particularly in bed. Just look at that genitalia!
I am starting to wonder if this romantic poetry thing is going to become a phase for me. Although the last one turned out the genderfriend was a traitor... alas, I can dream of Princesses and Princes can I not?
EDIT: 22/10/2012. Reviewed, fixed form grammar and rhythm with the help of my darling muse.